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Review:TheMarauderChick says:
Hello! I'm Sankavi, here from the review tag thread ^_^

I love how this is (partially) from a elf's pof! It's not something i have seen often, and you've wrote it very well. The dynamics between the elf and the wizard is interesting, and with Rhein's added insight, it kind of reminds me of winky and her masters :)

The only sort of 'criticism' i have is the part where winifred figures out how hywel was was mobbed is very quick to the point where i kind of has to do a double take, because i didn't realize what had happened. i'm so sorry that i don't really know if there's a way tot fix this (or if it even needs fixing . . . ) but yeah. my two cents right there.

I really like this and I can't wait for the second part!

-Sankavi ^_^

Author's Response: Hi Sankavi!!

^_^ It's great to hear that this was something new to read about. Having an elf as a MC was a bit of a challenge. I was trying to set the stage for how house elves got into the situation of being house elves - so someone like Rhein made sense in that time too.

Ah, yeah, I could definitely flesh that out a bit to make it clearer - thanks for pointing that out!

I'm so glad you liked it. I should have the 2nd part out in a few weeks.

-Rose


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