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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
R&R Round 4! The Final one!

That dream was so powerful, and the perfect ending to the story. I think the way that they met on the stairs where it ended, to end it properly was so fitting of the entire story. This was probably up in the top fan fiction stories that I have ever read and I will most certainly be favouriting it.

Your characters stuck to the traits you gave them at the beginning, and no matter what they felt, they never strayed from that. They never became a completely different person to feel an emotion more strongly. I've seen a lot of authors do that, so good job!

I am intrigued to read your other stories, as this one was so fantastic! Thanks for the incredible read, I'm glad I responded to the thread when I did!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Hello once more!!

The dream, ironically, was based off of a dream that I had. It didn't have people in it, but it did have the house. After I woke up, I remembered the dream and thought that I could use it as a metaphor. :)

Favoriting it?! You're SO sweet! Thank you so, so much!!!

I really tried to keep the characters true to themselves throughout the whole story. They changed a little, of course, but I didn't want them to change so much that they became totally different people.

I would be honored if you would read some of my other stories when you find the time. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying this one!

~UnluckyStar57


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