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Review:800 words of heaven says:

I love Luna, but I don't often read stories with her in it, so I was delighted to get the chance to read this. This was such an adorable read.

I think you really captured the spirit of Luna. She's quite perceptive, and notices things about people rather quickly and very astutely. I was thinking that Mortimer was weird, about two lines before Luna declares it to him (it was a beautiful moment where one of my favourite characters and I were on the same wavelength, so thank you for that). She has a way of seeing things about ourselves that we would otherwise ignore or discard. It was wonderful to see that aspect of her here.

Mortimer was also rather interesting. I loved how his love for things that are stereotypically associated with being boring and ordinary made him rather extraordinary. Being a neat freak and having an unhealthy love of cheese can do that to a person!

This was just such a wonderful read, because the weather here today has been rather similar to the way it was described here, and so just like Luna's umbrella, this story brought a little sunshine into my day! Thanks for the gorgeous read!

Author's Response: Hi!! I'm so glad you thought this captured the spirit of Luna. She's one of my favourite characters and I was initially a bit terrified to write her :p

Haha, that's awesome that you and Luna were on the same wavelength! I agree though, she's very perceptive and sees things that other people often won't - I'm glad that came across in this.

I'm happy to hear that you liked Mortimer as well! Yeah, he's so normal that he's weird :p

Thank you so much for reading, and I'm glad it brought a little sunshine to a rainy day - your review did that to me too! :)

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