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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
R&R Round 2!

I love this chapter. I mean, I don't like how verbally and emotionally abusive Albus comes off, but I do love Melinda's realization that he helped her grow, and she now knows things that it could take people ages to ever discover.

I think there's something powerful to be said about the realization we see in this chapter. I mean, she can look back on memories and see both the good and the bad, no matter how awful the situation. Fantastic job on giving both the narrator and the story such depth, I found myself agreeing with everything said, and was completely absorbed the entire time. I had no desire to check the time, squirm in my seat or chew on the string from my sweat shirt.

This story is amazingly captivating and I can't wait to rush off to read the next chap!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Hello again! :)

Yeah, Albus got very rude in an extremely short amount of time. I would like to think that he felt self-conscious and didn't want to draw too much attention to himself, and Melinda's behavior (although it was not a huge deal) made him uncomfortable.

Melinda sees the good and the bad because I wanted her to be introspective. I wanted her to look back and think, "Yeah, we had some bad times, but there were good times, too." Thank you for being so absorbed in the story!!! I am never sure if my writing draws people in or not, and I am so glad that it didn't make you want to check the time. ;)

Thanks again for your review!

~UnluckyStar57


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