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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Bronze vs. Blue Review Tag! Yay! So much fun!

I loved this chapter. I think this was an exceptionally strong way to start out the chapter. I literally cannot wait to read the rest of this story. I was thinking to myself one last review and then I'll stop for the night, but now I've just got to finish this story.

The chapter was so simple, but so perfect. I really like how Albus embraces his Slytherin traits. I've read a lot of fic's where he's placed in Slytherin but doesnt have a single trait of one, I'm afraid I might do it myself. I also love how you really bring out the main characters Ravenclaw traits. Gotta love claws!

Anyways, that was fantastic, I can't wait to read more!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for your review! :D

I am so glad that you liked the chapter. It was somewhat based on an experience I had, but in the story, I blew everything out of proportion for dramatic effect. :)

Yeah, I really hate it when Albus is a Slytherin for no reason. I really wanted him to start out as sweet (at the beginning of the relationship) and then, as the months went by, become more cold and calculating.

'Claws are clawsome!! Melinda is still one of my most favorite characters that I have ever written. She's quirky and strange, and she does her own thing.

Really? You reviewed ALL of my chapters?!?!?! You are SUCH a doll!! Thank you so much! This really means a lot to me.


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