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Review:marauderfan says:
Hi! I'm here for our review swap. Sorry it took me a while!

Wow, this is really cool! It is so interesting to see the crazy, blood-purity-obsessed Walburga Black so... normal. Certainly nothing like the screaming, spitting portrait that hangs in Grimauld Place - in this she seemed resentful of her pureblooded upbringing. I'm really looking forward to seeing what made that change, from being this kind of jaded kid to turning into exactly what she would have hated as a kid.

I like that you included how much Kreacher cares about her, being willing to take the blame for Walburga sleeping in. She seems to have cared for him a lot more than her mother did, so it makes sense that Kreacher would have been so attached to her.

The comments about the second world war really interested me. It makes me wonder if that is the basis of her feelings towards Muggles and that's a reason why she grows to hate them so much later.

What a cool start! This is a really creative take on Walburga and I think you've done a wonderful job in this first chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Everyone wonders what happened to Walburga, and that's exactly what I was aiming for! You'll just have to wait and see how it all plays out (even I don't know the details of that, haha!)

Thanks again!

-Janelle


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