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Review:thestral517 says:
The chapter was fine. Enjoyed it and the last one too. Like for you, it was a busy time for many. Don't worry so much about what others think, just write your story the way that you want. That story is what people keep coming back to. No one wants to read a story written by committee. One note, you have a sentence that begins Scorpius and her, She and Scorpius might be more grammatically correct, but as I said before, it is your story, write it like you want.

Author's Response: Yeah, the only thing is that the number of reads didn't go down. I personally liked the last chapter, but when I posted it I felt that it was a little anti climatic, because the chapter before that was when they got together and I wasn't sure how exactly to bounce back from that, so maybe I took it to heart and I appreciated the feedback. The reason I mentioned it is because in my opinion being too slow is setting me back, it's about finding a happy medium, and I really just wanted input from the readers. Like I said I rarely let reviews change the plot line of the story, in fact it has happened only once and that was with Bryan and Stacy getting together, it was originally staying Bryan and Vivian. But I do use reviews to base how I go about presenting plot lines and when. In my original rough draft, all of chapter 12 never happened, heck they didn't even kiss until ch. 17 which was when I originally had them getting together. Want to note that obviously I don't do a story by committee or else I wouldn't have so many people hating on Rose all of the time.
Anyways thank you so much for the feedback. I really do appreciate it.


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