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Review:LilyLou says:
Here with our Review Swap!

I've read the first chapter before, and was intrigued, so your offering of a review swap gave me a good reason to keep reading this!

In the very beginning, and scattered throughout the story, there were a few times where you didn't capitalize the word "I". Just a little bit of critique before I go on about how great the chapter was;)

This was very interesting. I love how brave and stubborn you've written Miss Blanc to be, as well as cunning and clever. She's not stupid by any means, and knew how to weave her way through conversations with the Death Eaters without anything slipping out of her mouth and her giving away anything, or her being killed.

I'm interested in what's going to happen next. I want to know how or if she's going to escape, and how you're going to play out everything.

I can't wait to read more. Well done!

-Janelle

Author's Response: Hi there!

Sorry that this response is a little bit late ;/

I understand all of those grammatical errors and once the novel is finished, I will go back and get a BETA reader to sort all of that out :p

I'm glad you like my characterization of Imogen! I did try and make her as 'baddy' as I could so I'm glad it worked!

I hope you keep on reading! Thank you for the lovely review :)


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