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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Wow hi Jenny. Omg it's kind of hard for me to form coherant thoughts right now, let alone write them down.

I can't believe this was under 1000 words! You packed so much punch, this story was basically perfect. How do you do it? You managed to develop Georgia so well, and your descriptions were amazing and just gah HOW DO YOU DO IT IN SO LITTLE WORDS?!

I think that the story flowed really beautifully here, and the whole atmosphere of the story suited where Georgia was heading, Azkaban. It was really bleak and the atmosphere you created suited the content of the story as well. The whole thing flowed really smoothly and I'm still insanely jealous of your insane writing abilities.I used the word insane too much there.

Right now, I am really empathising with Georgie (because I've never been in her shoes :P) but it must be awful to be being shipped to Azkaban just for one spell. She didn't even mean to kill him, or even knock him down the stairs, after all - she was just sick of it, and for that I can sympathise with her, because sometimes you reach the end of your tether and yu need to do something or you'll burst.

If you hadn't said so, I would never have been able to tell this was your first time writing like this. It was amazing, and pulled off so well I love how everything is left really unclear, leaving a lot of the backstory up to the reader to decide. Like what the guy did to make Georgie angry, and who Georgie is. Evrything is slightly unclear, and that's amazingly done.

I really liked the use of the flashback as well, it all flowed really smoothly, because in lots of the stories I've read, flashbacks just make the story seem stilted and awkward, but here it was all wonderful and smooth and so well polished.

So basically, your writing is perfect and I loved reading this. :D

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