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Review:celadon says:
Here from the Blue vs Bronze Battle!

This was horrendously funny in a rather disturbing way. I haven't read this story before (which I am kicking myself about) so I read through the first two chapters before coming to review this one.
Oh. My. Lord. I have to say, your female characters are rather...impressive. You have the ferocious Cassie who can bring Voldemort to his knees with her bad breath and body odor. Then you have Lucy who seems to be quite the manipulative and insane psychoanalytic. Brilliant characters.
Lucy's training really seems to have an impact on Lorcan. Initially the quiet, timid boy, Lorcan seems to have developed a total maniac side. I quite like this new and improved Lorcan quite a lot.
Favourite line:
'Lysander rose from his stately desk chair, a favorite of his because of its spinning capabilities.'
This story also reminded my a tiny bit of Shakespeare's Taming of the Shrew. It was the subtle humor and sheer ridicule that really made me enjoy the story. It's nice to see bullies being tamed every once in a while.
It was hilarious and a great pleasure to read :)

Author's Response: Aw, you're so nice!!! Thank you so much for leaving a review on this chapter! :)

Yes, though most of my stories are sort of dark/mysterious, I tried to put some humor into this one. It was something that I had never done before, and I had a lot of fun attempting!

Thank you for thinking that my female characters were ferocious! I wanted them to be really unique, so I tried to make them mean without giving them any endearing qualities. It was surprisingly easy to do! :)

Hah, that line! I'm so glad you liked it! Lysander is just that kind of guy--a real dork, I think. :D

I have never read Taming of the Shrew, but I know that my scribblings cannot compare to the Bard's masterpieces! I would like to think that Lorcan, for once in his life, was somewhat of a hero in that he subdued the monstrous Cassie, but of course, he only did it out of self-preservation. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~UnluckyStar57


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