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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Thanks for the request in my thread!

All I have to say is Wow. This story was absolutely mind-blowing. I honestly don't even know how you came up with it. It was weird, and twisted, and crazy, and disturbing, but it was also romantic, poetic, sweet and dramatic all at the same time.

Your writing style is so captivating and addicting here, I couldn't yank my eyes from the story the entire time, I had to keep going. You make the reader feel the incubus' emotions. You really love the woman dressed as a man, until you hate her for doing those things to you.

You feel the sadness they feel when they watch everyone grow old and die. You've done a brilliant job here, my mind is quite literally blown. There were some minor spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing that completely jumped out at me, in fact when I went back through, I couldn't find them.

Brilliant job, really.

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Aw, thank you so much! I'm really glad to have such lovely feedback since I had no idea how this story would be received. I'm so glad you found all these contrasts and thought it was both twisted and romantic at the same time- that's just what I was going for! :)

I'm pleased you like the writing style as well! I had a lot of fun writing it, and that it helped you engage with the poor incubus.

I feel as if living on in that form would be so difficult and tragic, and I'm pleased that came across. I'll go back and edit out those mistakes soon! :)

Thanks so much for a wonderful review! :D I really appreciate it!


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