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Review:LilyLou says:
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Oooh, suspenseful. Extremely so. This seems like such an interesting story. Your use of words an imagery was fascinating and kept me reading on, interested in what was to happen to next. The girl is very interesting as well. I don't believe you revealed her first name, only that her surname is Blanc? That keeps the suspense going.

Your writing was fantastic and I might be back to read some more!

Great job!


Author's Response: Hi there!,
I'm very very happy that you liked it! I did try an create an element of mystery with the chapter which is almost a prologue, so I'm glad I did what I wanted to achieve!

Thank you so much for the lovely review :)

Bella x

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