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Review:Darcey says:
A good chapter. I'm sorry I've taken a bit ling, but such is life.
I'm glad Hermione amd Ron eventually got over themselves. Though admittedly it took nearly dying to get them to do so! I do agree with the point you made on your reply to my last review. I suppose I'd never really thought about the awkwardness there would be there and you're so right! It was worth the awkwardness though. I do like Ron and Hermione together, they're completely perfect for each other amd I will fight anyone who says otherwise.
I like the bits of action, they're always good to read. I think you do it really well. I get angry when a character appears to be being nice and really friendly and then they turn out to be bad. I think it's because it's so true, sometimes the nastoest people are the ones who are well liked and friendly. Especially when you're a girl, falseness and spite just seem to go hand in hand.
I know I've said it befire but I really do love this story and I'll see you for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I am glad that you liked this chapter, and yes, it took a lot to get Hermione and Ron to that point.. admittedly, it also took A LOT for them to kiss each other in the first place ;) I think they're a perfect couple as well, which is probably why I can't stand pairings like Draco/Hermione, because she belongs with Ron! Haha :)

I'm so glad to hear that about the action, as you've probably read in my author's notes later on I always find myself struggling with it, so thank you so much for saying that! I agree, is is horrible to deceived like that. It's also very sad, in a way, because it makes trusting people very difficult.

Thank you so much for this review! It's so nice to get to hear your thoughts on these earlier chapters as well, and I can't thank you enough for taking the time to do this!


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