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Review:MrsKatieGrint says:
You know, I think I like how Rose didn't start out already pregnant in your story. I think this helps building up the plot and the flow of the story before all heck breaks out.

I seriously ADORE the relationship Rose has with James. Its just so nice! And really, all her interactions with friends and family are really great too. Rose is just so quirky, and she's one of the more unique Roses I've read about.

I think you're doing a fabulous job on staying away from cliches, I know it must be hard, writing a next gen. pregnancy novel, but this is really fantastic.

I honestly cannot wait to see what all you have planned. It's certainly an interesting story, and I don't really have a clue as to all the possibilities you can make this story into!:D

Author's Response: Awe! Thanks so much!

That was my aim, I felt like having her be pregnant at the beginning left too much room for error and chaos, and by her getting pregnant a couple of chapters in, you've given everyone a chance to meet the characters and get a feel for who's who.

I had so much fun writing in James and Rose, and if you think they're cute, there's another cousin relationship I think you'll love even more.

Thanks so much for the compliment on cliches, I've been trying really hard to stay away from them, so I'm glad that I'm accomplishing that goal! I really think you'll like what's going to happen next!

xoxo LL


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