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Review:MrsKatieGrint says:
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Oh geez! Seriously, that cliffhanger was a little too intense. I'm still sitting here with my mouth wide open!

Okay, forreal, how did this crazy idea even come about? This is seriously one of the most interesting stories I think I've ever read. The idea, plot, and the characters are just so striking. They all just stand out, and it's all so fantastically worded!

I think your attention to detail is what really makes this story the way it is. It is seriously so beautiful in the way you described everything. It could not have flowed any better, this chapter was seriously on point.

Your characters too! They're just so full of life, and well written. It irks me when people write Harry, because most of them can't do Harry justice, after all, JK wrote from that view, so its hard to beat, but you on the other hand did a STUNNING job. I was fooled that this was JK writing, because you did a FABULOUS job with Harry, and Devlin too.

Gosh, I could serious gush all day about this chapter. There just wasn't anything I felt you could do to improve this chapter, its wonderful exactly how it is.

I'm so glad you tagged me, because I probably wouldn't have stumped upon this story otherwise (gasp) and I might have lived my life without reading this!

So I've totally put this on my reading list, and I absolutely canNOT wait to read on to see what happens! Cheers!


Author's Response: As long as the 'next' button is working, is there truly a cliffhanger that is 'too intense'? LOL I take great pride in being able to make people's mouths hang open!

Yeah...this crazy idea has been in my head so long it's kinda hard to puzzle how it came about. I think I attempted to in my MTA thread. But to be honest, you should read the next chapter first - because the reason this came into my head would be a spoiler for the next chapter. You have to meet Alexandra first.

People keep saying I have really good attention to detail and I keep cheering myself on every time they do, because now they're saying it in a positive way. I used to really over describe things. I think I have found a good balance.

This was a huge compliment (the writing Harry bit) and wow - thank you.

I'm glad I tagged you too. :) And you should seriously read the next chapter - although I make no guarantees as to whether it is cliff-hanger free...

Thanks for the awesome review!

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