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Review:800 words of heaven says:

So this is really awkward because it has been THAT long since I visited your page. Even though I haven't finished Missing or caught up with Careful What You Wish For, I decided to start a new story, because there's a soft spot for Regulus in my heart.

I actually adore your characterisation of Regulus. I'm obviously writing him once he's dead, so I have a lot more freedom with his characterisation, so it's really interesting to see him when he was alive and doing naughty things. It's already evident that he hasn't completely bought into Voldemort's cause, although I can imagine this might be the case for a lot of new Death Eaters as they go through the rigorous training process you've described (so scary).

I just also wanted to mention that I'm so impressed by how much your writing has improved since I began reading your work! I think I started with The Kissing Game (or was it Ava?) and your writing was good then, but oh, the places you've gone since! Your clean yet evocative descriptions almost brought tears to my eyes and your dialogue, which has always been fantastic was just... ugh.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Since this is your first try at a truly dark story, I'm doubly intrigued! Fantastic job!

Author's Response: Hey there!

There is a super soft spot for Regulus in my heart, too, I don't know why I've never attempted to write him before! But so far, it has been a lot of fun!

Aw, thank you so much! And just saying, I absolutely love your dead Regulus - though ours are quite clearly very different!

I'm glad you think my writing has improved! I remember I used to be pretty terrible with descriptions, so I'm so happy you think that has improved!

Thank you for the lovely review!


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