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Review:Courtney Dark says:
OMG THERE ARE MORE CHAPTERS! I'm sorry to say I may or may not have kinda given up on Naive because I thought you might have abandoned it, BUT IT'S BACK AND I'M SO HAPPY BECAUSE I REALLY ENJOYED IT WHILE I WAS READING IT!

Okay, that's enough capitals Courtney.

Anyway, I thought I'd come and give this story some much deserved love.

Ack, there was so much stuff I wanted to say while I was reading this chapter, but my memory is crap so now I can't remember it all. Buggeration!

But anyway, Lily is an awesome character. She reminds me a lot of me, actually, and I love that she has such a good relationship with Ginny! Actually, her interactions with both her parents were really entertaining, mainly because it reminded me so much of me! And then Lily's conversation with Ginny about her Dad just felt so believable and real!

Another random little detail I loved about this chapter is how you mentioned that Lily got all the worst traits from her father. I don't know why, but that made me laugh.

Does Lily actually have a plan for the rest of her life now? Yay! Go Lily! Although eighteen isn't that old to still know what to do - although I guess when you're Harry Potter's son, people expect big things out of you!

Awesome chapter!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: No, it's completely okay! I knew a lot of people would have thought I'd given up on it but I just had had a massive year (last year of high school, friend and family drama, personal problems etc.) and I'd had a bit of a blank for this story but I'm back now! I totally get why people gave up on it though, I knew it from the start but I was always determined to never abandon it. I'm glad you're back too now! :p

Lily started out a lot like me - and still is - but she's also evolved into this whole new character that I'm both envious of and not envious of, if that makes sense? :p

haha, the relationship between Ginny and Lily is exactly like the relationship between my own mum and me :p I hardly ever see really strong mother/daughter bonds anymore so I wanted to write one because I have one and it's the best thing ever! I'm glad that felt real! My dad is thankfully pretty supportive of anything I do so I just thought about my friends who don't have the support I thankfully get :p

hahaha, whenever I have a bad trait myself, it's generally from my dad so I just projected that onto Lily :p

Yeah, she sorta does! I completely agree that being eighteen not many people know what to do but in today's society a lot of people expect you to and especially if you're someone significant, they really expect things!

Thanks for the lovely review! ♥

- Kayla :)


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