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Review:MrsKatieGrint says:
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Okay, so I was totally just creeping on your account page on the forum, and randomly clicked on this story, and I think I couldn't have chosen a better story.

Seriously, this was just beautiful. I loved the attention to detail you gave to everything you described. Your choice words were wonderful and helped paint a clear picture in my head.

The boys were just darling! I loved Charlie's excitement over dragons!(:
I thought it was super cute and thoughtful to include Fabian and Gideon in this one-shot. They are terribly forgotten in most fan-tics.

Can I just say, I simple adored the way you characterized Molly. I couldn't help but fall in love with her beautiful personality. You did a fabulous job with her, and I have no doubt you definitely did her justice.

Wow, I just love this story. #favorited


Author's Response: Hi Katie!!

^_^ I like people creeping on my account page. Especially if it leads to clicking on a story.

This will sound a bit dorky, but I did struggle keeping happy/fluffy details in this story. I usually write stories with a darker edge than this has. And I've been known for leaving out good details - your comments made me quite happy!!

I'm so glad you liked the boys. I wasn't sure if it was too obvious/cliche to have him excited about dragons. I was thinking back to how my siblings and I would play fantastic games like that where we'd be batman, robin, and catwoman or we'd go off fighting bad guys (sometimes we even hit on what we'd actually do as adults).

Once I picked the timing for this story, I felt I had to give them a cameo. They had to be close to Molly for her to get their personal effects when they died. Given the date they died, I'm sure they were rather involved with Bill, Charlie, Percy, and a bit with the twins. A toddler/infant wheyen they died so they wouldn't have a good memory of them (if any).

Molly was so fun to write. I'm thrilled you liked her. :D

Ah, thank you so much for a fantabulous review and making me go all squishy.


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