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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hey,

Although Al did kinda go crazy, him and Rose are so adorable together. Cousinly love, I love it when they're written as really close and I think I've read/written it so much it truly has become my head canon.

"No, but you're having some." - Either I'm being picky (sorry) or I'm just odd :p but it sounded a little off, try 'one' instead of 'some'.

Lily is cute, love that she's genuinely worried about Rose bless her. I have quite a nasty suspicion about Blair, even though she's Rose's friend I think maybe she may be one to cause a lot of drama when she finds out.

I literally have such a big smile right now on my face, Rose is so like her mother!! I love how she goes to the library to study despite everything that is going on and I guess in a way it's her way of trying to keep things normal even though everything from now on in is so not gonna be normal :)

Super duper glad that Scorpius was the one to find Rose and ask to talk rather than the other way around, which I think is normally a bit overdone so yay for straying from cliche!!

Rose is brilliant and I love how you've characterised her, especially her little comments or thoughts which make me laugh. Especially this line - "I think we all know who I do in my free time." Pure brilliance!

Scorpius is so darn cute and I want him! I am beyond glad he's told Rose how he feels and that they're now together *Happy dance* Squeee, oh Rosie fire and ice go perfectly together!!

Absolutely loved it and I am super happy right now :D

There were a few teeny tiny things, like missing fullstops and a few I's that need to be capitlised.

12/10
Much love,
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: Hey! I love your reviews!

I totally agree about Al and Rose, they're a great cousin combo, and I can't wait to write about them more. He's definitely going to be her biggest rock in all of this. As for that line, it's actually something my friends brother said to her when he found out she was expecting, and it was so overdramatic I felt like it was perfect to put in there. But I will read it over and consider the change! Thanks!

I love how genuine Lily is, even if she's not the best at keeping secrets, or timing. I also think you're right to be suspicious of Blair.

Yeah, I felt that it would be very fitting of her to distract herself by doing something she loved. I think you're going to see her doing a lot more of what she loves, rather than thinking about how she wished she had done it.

Thanks for the compliment on her character. Rose is my favourite person to write about... Ever. So it's really fun and interesting to have her character grow and add in fun little things like those comments. She's so smart and witty that the comments suit her really well.

Right? I wish he was my boyfriend!! I loved using the fire and ice reference, I wanted them to get together earlier in the story because so many people make the drama all about them. But I feel like with them having a history, the main drama should be about them dealing with the kid their gonna have!

I'm so glad you loved the chapter!! Thanks so much for the review! I'll go back through and look for mistakes and highlight them for when I revise all of the chapters!!

Thanks again! and 12/10 WOWZERS! SQUE!

xoxo LL


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