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Review:PitchBlue says:
Yeah I knew it was going to happen!! :D Totally shipping Aeryn/Cora now (Coryn seems fitting?). Seriously tho, this chapter is so amazing. You combined two very important moments, not to mention two very different moments in mood and it fits perfectly! Tho I'm really frustrated with Aeryn that she doesn't think the whole Death Eaters conversation is a big deal (I mean frustrated in a good way, if you know what I mean) but then again being locked up in a broom closet with your love interest, sexual tension going haywire, you'd get distracted for less.

I really like how you wrote Peter's reaction to his girlfriend's inner turmoil. His duality is really interesting, because one the one hand we know he's sleeping with Luciana and on the other hand he's hurt because Aeryn isn't that into him anymore and he can't wrap his head around it.

OMG I just had a major realization! That'll eventually be another reason for him to really go to the dark side (apart from them having cookies, har har): in his eyes, Aeryn betrayed him! (I mean, eventually he will find out, right?)

Am I going too far with this theory? :P It kind of seems like it could fit. Anyway, brilliant (and hot!) chapter girl, you're a brilliant writer :D

Author's Response: I'm glad I decided to commit and make this ship happen ... all thanks to you, dear ;) It's kinda fun writing Aeryn's POV now, because she's finally interesting/growing as a character. Don't be too hard on her - she was distracted by Cora, she's not thinking clearly XD But that conversation is very important so I had to remind the reader that things are about to get serious ... and I think Coryn is perfect, good job with that one.

I don't want to give too many spoilers, but yes, you're not crazy, your theory is pretty close to what I have planned. Not completely, but it's funny how accurate your Peter description is, just the way I want things XD

Thanks so much for your review, I'm about a third of the way done with the next chapter - real lyfe got in the way, what can you do ;)


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