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Review:toomanycurls says:
This chapter is very amazing. I thought the first part with them leaving the tent and getting separated was a little slow, but that was totally compensated for in the second half with Sadie's flashback.

ha! I love that the twins put some of their snacks in Harry and Ron's back. Genius!! It would have been cool to get the deets on the new invention though.

O.o Like I said above, the flashback is just a slight overload of wow. It's such an amazing insight to Sadie's past and how she lost her voice. The action and drama is incredible and well done. I just can't imagine how Sadie managed after living through that.

Will Sadie try to tell them about her flashback? Will anyone ask her about it after they get back?! I want her to get love and hugs now.

-Rose

Author's Response: Hi! Guess what, I'm finally responding to your great review! I'm SO sorry for being such a slowpoke. Real life and all that junk is the only excuse I have.

Sorry that the beginning of the chapter was a little slow. I was trying to play out how this felt for the others, but I was also struggling with keeping it new and not just rehashing JKR's plot. That probably had a lot to do with how it ended up feeling.

The flashback was pretty intense though. Glad you thought it worked.

Those twins are sneaky, aren't they. I loved it when that thought came to me and I just couldn't resist putting it in the story.

I hope the flashback wasn't too much. But, I really had to show exactly how bad it had been, to explain why Sadie is how she is. And yes, there were clues there to how she lost her voice.

I'm not sure anyone knows she actually had a flashback. (Okay, that's a lie, but if I tell you, I spoil the next chapter.) And I don't think anyone will ask her about it...at least not right now. They don't want to make her upset. But eventually, these things will come out to her friends.

I can promise some smiles and hugs in the near future for Sadie though.

Thanks again for reading, and I'm so sorry for the wait!



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