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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
I am here for review tag!

I feel really bad that it has been so long since I reviewed your last chapter!

The small section at the beginning of the chapter was a really great hook. It was beautifully written, suspenseful, and evokes a sense of panic and fear.

Oh, lucky Verity; she gets interviewed by Dawlish (can you sense my sarcasm)? Dawlish has recently become the subject of my hatred, but I love hating him. I think that you did a fantastic job with his characterization.

So the altering areas of time were really fantastic. It was a very interesting way to provide background information on Verity while still providing story progression. I'm just going to go ahead and say that the device was genius, in my opinion (though I'm unsure of how far up the scale of significance my opinions lie :P).

It's great that Verity has decided to rejoin the world, so to speak. It's a realistic transition of grieving one's loss to beginning to try to move on.

I found it very humorous that she couldn't figure out which one of the (many) Weasley boys George was. I found it even funnier that she exclaimed her realization :D. You've done wonderfully with George's characterization, by the way.

Another death? O.O You ended the chapter on a cliffhanger?! No fair. That's really tempting!

Anyway, this was a great chapter! I loved it!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Hi! :)

Aw, no worries at all! These chapters tend to be quite long and intimidating to review, I think! :) I'm just glad you got a chance to come back!

I'm glad you liked the beginning and it was interesting! I like playing around a lot with POVs in my stories and I'm pleased it came across well.

Haha, I agree, Dawlish is just the worst person ever! I love hating him too, and I'm really glad he came across well. He's a great nemesis to poke fun at. :P

Yay! I'm so glad you liked the structure. I think giving background in a story is really important and this story is full of that. And I value your opinions very highly! :D

Yes, I felt like just wallowing in her grief wasn't something Verity would be able to do for long. She has a lot to do and to live for. And I'm glad you liked the George seen, and his characterization! I was so worried about writing him right since he's such a beloved character, so hearing he came across well is really loely.

Yeah, there are a lot of depressing and mysterious events going on! :P

Thanks so much for this wonderful review! :D I really appreciate it!!! :)


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