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Review:ReeBee says:
Hi There! Review Thread!

Gah!! Awesome awesome awesome!! I don't have any CC! It was the perfect little special slice of life! The characterisation was good; you took advantage of the fact that we already know Ginny and Harry really well, due to JK!! A lot of people make the mistake of not using that to their advantage!

The dialogue was beautiful! I got tears in my eyes! The fact that Ginny isn't a 'perfect' mum from the beginning is gorgeous! I love your portrayal of her! :D

The only thing that I would recommend is to maybe edit the scene where everyone's crowding around the Boy Who Lived's son. It was a but unclear and fuzzy.

But, I loved it!! I literally have nothing to say!! :D


Author's Response: Hi, there!

I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story. It was fun to write and I did try to take advantage of the combination of things we know from canon and my own experiences. I don't think of either Ginny or Harry as "perfect" parents because nobody really is. But they'll try hard. :)

I sort of wanted the scene in the hospital hallway to seem chaotic and fuzzy, because in my mind it was near pandemonium. I'm glad it came out that way.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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