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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hi, Hi, Hi :D

Exciting stuff, I absolutely Jacqueline's POV. She is such a caring friend and I guess in a way I can see myself like her as I am sort of the 'mother hen' in my friendship group. It gives her more characterisation!!

Aww bless Rosie, the way she manages to say she's pregnant is sort of like she's accepting it and she can't change that at this moment in time. I just want to squish her and hug her tightly!

I love how James tries to make it less awkward but somehow makes it a bit more awkward by suggesting to teach the baby how to fly once it's old enough. Hmmm do I sense that James has a little crush on Jacqueline?

Oh your poor sister lol, POV changes are hard aren't they. If you ever need someone to look over them I wouldn't mind :)

It's an interesting way for both her family and Scorpius to find out. Poor Scorpius, I would so not want to be him right now especially as Al's gone a bit crazy.

10/10
Can't wait for chapter 6!!

-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!! And yeah my sister was so done with me, and then I told her I had started a new story, she looked murderous. I might just take you up on that offer of looking over those changes because I have a few more planned!!

Yeah, it may be just a bit of a crush, which are always so fun!! I do feel bad for Scorpius but writing Al like that was so fun I can't feel too bad.

Once the first chapter for my new story is validated chapter 6 will go in, 6 and 7 were easy to write so they'll come up quicker!!

Thanks again for the reviews! I think I look forward to yours the most!!

xoxo LL


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