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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This is a good continuation of the story! It's nice to see Draco and Hermione's inner monologues. I like the fact that Draco first starts to have feelings for Hermione rather than the other way around, and that he considers all the other aspects of his life around it. I do feel like maybe his feelings are a little strong too fast, but it's very early days yet.

The prose, dialogue and descriptions are very good!

I did spot a couple of little grammar mistakes which could be fixed by a read-through or a beta :)

Good job!

Author's Response: Hi again!

Ah, I'm pleased you came around for the second chapter. I usually don't like when people choose to read this particular story, especially people from over at the forums (because it's not very good, and definitely not my best work, especially the beginning chapter), but thank you for tagging me anyways.

Haha, yeah, I agree, I did rush it a bit :P

I've actually put in an edited version of this and the next couple of chapters into the queue, so I think all the typos up to chapter four will soon be updated and fixed :)

Thanks for tagging me!

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