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Review:toomanycurls says:
There's so much awesome in this chapter that I'll have to try hard to focus.

I love the pre-match tension at the beginning. After the late night adventure Lexi had and Charlie's pregger stuff - this match will be a fire fight! (Been watching Boondock's Saints - sorry)

Yup, can't blame Lexi for appreciating the quidditch boys. *ahem* Wait, Carter plays in a kilt? That has to be interesting. I might watch that match with binoculars. :D Oh, they all play in kilts? That's a nice flair.

I like Carter's pre-game talk. It felt very tense and pre-game-y.

Um, is the match the best time for Charlie to open up to Lexi? :-o but I wanted her to end up with Remus!! I laughed so hard at Lexi's imagined wedding vows between Charlie and Carter.

haha, I do think Jordon's comments are right on with their mid-air fight. They're going to snog soon, I can feel it.

Oh dear, the body block was an extreme measure. o.o

St. Mungo's? For a week? And Sirius is lurking in the hospital wing to see how she's doing??! I might die from squee and worry. I do think their conversation is adorable. They should snog... No? okay. I'll wait.

Ha, is Sirius just intrigued because of her persistent rejection? I like Remus' role and Dr. Love.

Lily and Sirius' joking/banter/(flirting?) was awesome. I got a good laugh with her secret obsession with his lips and her calling his hair beautiful. ...where did Remus go?

She needs to go stick with Remus!

Can't wait to read about the party from Sirius' POV.


Author's Response: Yay for awesome and unfocusing! (I think!)

And yes, the match! I love this chapter! (And no need to be sorry! :D)

Ooh, those quidditch boys. And not a kilt, a kit. Like jerseys, robes, the things the wizards wore for quidditch in the movies.

And Carter! I love him as Captain! :) And no! Charlie really needs to work on her timing! And don't worry, she will (sort of) end up with Remus (spoilers!)

And perhaps, but that's one thing I won't spoil! And yes, although Lexi does take quidditch very seriously!

And yay for squee! And I'm sorry for no snogging! It will come... at some point...

Yay for Dr. Remus/Love and Sirius predicament! And yes, flirting is a must! And where did Remus go? :P

Go Remus! And I hope you like the next one!

Thank you so much Rose! :)

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