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Review:maraudertimes says:

This chapter was a little sadder than the last, especially the part about the children, but I found Godric's voice endearing. He really does believe in equality for all.

I'm excited to see how this school plan goes (I already know the ending, but the process will be cool to read about), and I'm definitely anticipating how they named it (Hogwarts? Really?). Also, I assume this might be when Salazar decides to take up his old pureblood habits, so I think it'll be interesting to see how you manage to work with that.

One more thing: I really loved how Godric's wife rushed in to battle. At that age I'm guessing women weren't typically warriors, but since she's a witch I assume many men thought highly of her (until the incident, of course). It was really cool to see a woman in that sort of position, so kudos to you!

Overall, I really liked this chapter and I'm anticipating the others! One more chapter and I might be hooked! :)

Great job!

Author's Response: Hi there! Aw, I'm really glad you liked Godric's voice in this. Yeah it is pretty sad, but I think there needed to be a motivation to start a school in the first place because formal schools weren't really a thing in the tenth century, haha.

Much of the next chapter covers that, actually (the planning, and how they named the school. Ha I know right? Hogwarts is the most bizarre name. Wizards are strange people.)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked Laudine! I'm sure it wasn't typical, but hey, it could have happened, especially with witches! Someone had to challenge gender stereotypes even in the 900's :p

Thanks so much for reading, and for your wonderful review! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story so far!! ♥

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