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Review:toomanycurls says:
I'm prepared for this chapter. *phew* I think I am.

I do need to know what happened with Charlie at the party.

I'm trying hard to like Carter. So hard right now. I can kind of get why he's upset about the secret romance but she has some valid concerns (as valid concerns people ever have for secret relationships). Well that fell apart rather fast as far as relationship arguments go. I do think it was weird for her not to tell Lexi. I mean, they're bffs. I'd be mad at my bff for having a relationship and not telling me.

Smooth move, Charlie, tell her you're devastated because of her breakup. *sigh* teenagers

As much as they make fun of Kendra. I quite like her. She seems to have a good idea as to what's really going on with people and yet she respects their privacy a bit.

I still crack up when they say they don't look cheap.

I really like her percetion of the party. It's kind of how I feel at parties. With all the noise and movement it could be quite overwhelming.

*evil eye at Remus* I can't decide - was that really a tonic? Did he intentionally get her smashed? Did he roofie her?

I do love his flirting. This line was perfect 'He isn't much of a good person, is he? And I quite like the dress'

O.o how did they get from compliment to the next scene? O.O I feel like I need to give one of them a lecture - I just can't decide who at the moment. But, yeah, is it warm in here or is that just me?

I love her reaction when she wakes up! Immitating Trelawney like that.

ugh, Diggory. Can I hate him? :)

Oh no, running into Carter then was not ideal. :(

haha, I really do like Kendra. She pretty much asked the same questions I would.

I really love how you play with perspectives by telling the story of the party from multiple perspectives. It's brilliant and very well done. I'm less happy with Remus and his drunk decision making skills.

-Rose

Author's Response: Hey!

Are you ready? Really? Let's go then! ;)

And you must like Carter! Love Carter! Become Carter! Actually, don't. That would be weird if my character started talking to me via internet. ;)

And yes, teenagers are weird. But Kendra! I've had mixed reactions about Kendra, but I can't help but love her! Although, that might be because I know her and I know why she is how she is. :)

And yes. They are expensive ;)
And yay for parties! Well, not really. And yay! I got the party feeling down! That's big since I've never been to one :)

And don't worry, Remus is a sweetie! It really was a tonic! And that line! Remus is such a sweetie (redundancy here, but he is!!!).

And yes, they do seem to move fast... and maybe you should. I feel awkward lecturing them...

And yes, Charlie's not good under pressure. And yes! HATE DIGGORY!!! And no, not ideal whatsoever. And Yay for Kendra!

As for the perspectives, I'm so glad you liked the multiple perspectives idea for the party! Yay! And Remus... poor little sweetie. Gah! I don't even know what to do with him.

Thank you so much Rose!
Lo:)


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