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Review:toomanycurls says:
I have such a soft spot for Reg. he sounded so adorable in DH so I'm excited to read about him!

I love that you had Mary Macdonald as his wife. It's just tying him closer to people I'm familiar with.

I'm suddenly finding the need to read more Reg/Mary fics. They sound so perfect together.

You gave such a real feel to the horror of the second wizarding war. Especially for someone like Reg who lived through and lost loved ones the first time around. His stakes are so much higher now that he has a family. Oh gosh. :( You've made me care about him too much.

Oh dear, I was waiting for his run in with Harry, Ron, and Hermione. I kind of love the irony of him thinking she was in league with Voldemort. (Strike the kind of.)

I can't emphasize enough how beautiful and tragic this is to read. His love for Mary is so overt and genuine and the loss he experiences at her absence is just heart breaking.

Their kids are such dears. I love that Maise stood up to the Carrows. Ooh, yes! he needs to listen to Potterwatch. :-o It's Mary!! That was a brilliant move.

I'm so glad he's discovered hope again through the Potterwatch and the anti-Voldemort movement.

You have me on the edge of my seat with his sneaking into the Ministry. Maintenance workers are hardly scruitinized so I hope he makes it in!! *sigh* thank goodness.

Their reunion is so beautiful. It fills me with warm fuzzies that they made it out safely and together. You had me worried in the middle. This is so wonderfully done!!

-Rose

Author's Response: I'd be interested to find more Reg/Mary fics too - I've actually never seen anything else about Reg! I'm sure they must exist, though!

Thank you, I was really trying to make the horror of the war feel real. In a way I think Reg Cattermole is one of the most realistic characters in the series simply because he's so average, haha. So I was attempting to show the war through a relatable person, one who's not going around destroying Horcruxes. It's wonderful to hear that I made you feel for the characters, thank you!

Haha, yeah - there's really no way he could have known that was actually Harry Potter's friend with Polyjuice Potion and a trick sweet from Weasley's Wizard Wheezes :p In league with Voldemort seemed like a logical explanation!

Thank you, I'm so glad the feelings of nervousness during his Ministry-infiltration and happiness at the reunion came across. One of the things I put the most thought into in writing this was the various emotions involved so I'm really glad you commented on them! :)

Thank you for yet another wonderful review. ♥


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