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Review:toomanycurls says:
Oh wow, I love the flow and beauty you capture in the beginning of this chapter. The imagery you use nudges the story on and sets a haunting mood for the chapter.

Poor Arian - you describe his episode extremely well. The terror Imogen felt came through very well and caused me to feel the same panic she did. I quite liked that she was able to recall how to help him!

Visions, hmm, this could be interesting. It's always so sad to see what sacrifices people make because they have visions. In Arian's case it's the siezures. :(

It's exciting to have Draco's POV. You switch voices very well. It can be hard to jump to another person like that.

I love how you write Draco. He's funny, intilligent, and a touch on the mean side. I love this line 'She called me selfish and egotistic and in the end, she won.' It's just so lovely and curt.

His insights on the difference between death eaters and other people was beautiful and so insightful.

Wait, Travers? Like the death eater? I'm suspicious. O.o She's definitely not who she says she is.

Her story is full of holes! Why are they trusting her??!!

well, at least Imogen is not completely trusting her.

Dementors and yaxley, oh my.

I have to say, I've seen such growth and maturity with your writing style in this story. It's really exciting to see that (in addition to the exciting story) while reading this fic.

-Rose

Author's Response: Ahh, I always love your reviews because they really are so lovely to read.

I'ts so nice to hear that you liked the imagery at the beginning of the chapter because I was so worried that maybe it was just a tad too much but I'ts good to know that it wasn't.

I have to say, I do feel bad for Arian too but maybe he'll become more stronger as the chapters go on? Also, I'm very happy to hear that you liked me putting Draco's POV in there because I was worried it might have been slightly risky!

As with Marla..all shall be revealed in time ;)

Haha, thank you once again for such a nice review :)

Bella x


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