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Review:Bellatrixlestrange123 says:
Hi there! I'm here for our review swap :)

I think you did an amazing job at characterizing Rowena. Even though she is, I'll admit, a canon character. Her personality is still something that was yet to be set in stone so just like I said in my review for 'on air', you had the full rights to turn Rowena into a person entirely of your liking. Of course her character had to embody the traits of Ravenclaw house to some extent but even then, you did an absolutely unbeatable job, well done!

Now, I'm not an historian so even if they were a few errors here and there, I didn't notice them at all and even if they were then you don't need to worry about them because I doubt they would make this story any less of the lovely piece of writing that it is. Your paragraphs and imagery flowed smoothly and your writing was very plain sailing and lovely to read.

What's more is that I am very jealous of how effortless your dialogue came across to the reader and trust me, I find dialogue so so so hard to write (ugh). So, I am in awe of the fact that you could pull it off so well.

I will definitely be reading more of this, keep up the good work!

Bella x

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much, I'm so glad you like my charactersation of Rowena! My goal in that was to bring out the traits of Ravenclaw house in her character, and you're absolutely right in that there's still a lot of leeway in fully developing a character who doesn't actually appear in the books.

Thank you for the lovely compliments about my writing style and imagery! ♡ And I'm glad there are no noticeable historical errors, haha.

I'm glad the dialogue worked too. I understand your difficulties with writing dialogue! To be honest I've always wondered if the dialogue in this story sounded too modern, so thanks - that is so great to hear that it seems effortless.

Thanks so much for reading, and for your review!


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