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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Hello again, it's been a long time! :)

Well, wasn't this just a mind-blowing chapter? Wilson Young is a great original character, and you've written him very well! The fact he's all alone and doesn't have anything but jumps at the opportunity to get something that just might get him started and on his feet again no matter how he might personally feel about it makes me so sad because no one should have to live like that :( ANyway, great character!

Don't get me started on Deliah Jones. That woman is nasty and I hate her. But, I love the unraveling of her character bit by bit. It's infuriating but also great at the same time because it really pulls the reader in. We don't know what she's going to do next or what might come out about her and her paying someone to bite Dominique simply because she wanted an actual werewolf perspective makes us hate her all the more but in a way I respect her for her job and the way she handles it, but she is just a horrible person.

As a whole, this chapter was really suspenseful and definitely kept me reading straight through it. You didn't give us many details in some places but when you did it still wasn't enough and the mystery remains in all of this. Even though you feel this was a hard chapter for you to write, I think you did an amazing job with it!

Please come back any time for more if you'd like! :)
~MadiMalfoy x
p.s. my account is being weird so that's why my name isn't linked. :(

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Apologies for the delay in responding.

I am pleased you liked the chapter. I was worried about my portrayal of Wilson but he seems to have come across to you the way I wanted him to, so that makes me feel nice =)

Delilah is crazy yeah but I love unraveling her too and I am glad you're enjoying that as well. She is a horrible person and more on her motives for doing what she did are revealed in the next chapter!

I am pleased you found the chapter suspenseful and that the mystery remained as I wanted that. I am so happy to hear that you think I did well on it.

Thanks a ton!

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