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Review:LilyLou says:
Kiana, here with our review swap!

This is a magnificent one shot! I love the short sentences that were very meaningful. That's how I like to write, as well. You explained everything so wonderfully, I felt as though I could see Pansy and all her Angular Cuts. You gave us a little insight on her personal life as well, not just the war itself, and I liked that. The mentioning of her mother, father and Draco, that is. You created a perfect cloud of depression in your writing. I could feel her pain with your words, and again, absolutely magnificent.

Well done on your placing of Second Runner-Up in Lululuna's Unexpected Voice Challenge! I participated as well in that :)

-Janelle

Author's Response: Hey there Janelle!

I'm glad you liked the short sentences, because I think I've finally developed a style and they're part of it. I'm so glad you liked the explanation to Pansy's life though, because I was worried that it had been a little too ambiguous and vague but you've calmed that!

Thanks for such a great review! I read your entry for the challenge too, and really enjoyed it! ♥

-Kiana


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