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Review:Katie says:
"The next day seemed to drone, as Hermione just left her Ancient Runes class, off to Transfiguration, which to her displeasure, hosted both Ron and Lavender." Break this up. It's a run-on sentence.

"she felt her eyes fill with water" What else would they fill with? Also, girls' laughs usually aren't described as 'booming'.

Author's Response: Katie.

Hi. Thank you so much for pointing those out! I highly appreciate them!

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