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Review:Katie says:
"Anger boiler dangerously but somewhere in her was screaming for help." This sentence is awkward. Also, there's a typo.

"she said, exclaiming" Exclaiming isn't necessary. You already have "said".

"almost ages"? This doesn't make sense either.

Also, in that same section, you misspell "struggle". And crimson and scarlet aren't the same color, dear.

"She let the feel of water against her ears" This doesn't make sense either?

"Damn girls and their water fluids." What? This definitely doesn't make any sense either.

And, again, you've some missing commas.

Author's Response: Hiya!

Thanks for taking the time to pick those out :D Merlin knows I suck at editing.

Thank you so much lovely!

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