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Review:Lady Asphodel says:
YES! GO SEVERUS! XD

Lol, you should see how silly I look, just squealing and hyped up in my chair reading this chapter!!! Your story of Severus looking over Harry is better than MOST fics such as this that I have read since I have gotten into fanfiction.

You're writing is inspiring me to go back to re-writing my very - yes very first fan fic that I wrote similar to this, but it's different still... that's if and whenever I have the chance. :P


Anyways, you also give me hope in the world of writing and imagination because Merlin knows that I need it.


I enjoyed reading this chapter immensely as much as I did reading the first part! :D


It's quite adorable and really amusing to see how uncomfortable Severus was under Molly's praise and to her warm character period. :)

I wonder how'd she think if and when she finds out Severus was honestly treating Harry in his first year at Hogwarts? =P


Any who... I eagerly await for your next update! ^_^



- Asphodel

Author's Response: Tee Hee!!! I'm having so much fun writing this one let me tell you!! :) Glad you are liking it!

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