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Review:bellatrixlestrange123 says:
Hi there!

So I guess you could say Mary and Reg are canon as far as it goes to being present in the books but the fact that they only Appleseed for a little while realy does give you the poetic license to write this as beautifully as you did.

The beginning was heart warming and I always like hat sort of stuff, a sort of flashback on how two people first met. Your writing was so emphatic with the reader that I found my heart breaking when Mary was taken away and Reg lost his job and poor Maisie!

I'm glad this ended on a happy note though and you really did a wonderful job with writing it.

Keep it up!!!

Bella x

Author's Response: Thanks you!! Yeah, it was kind of difficult to write about a canon character that's only mentioned briefly, but you're right there's a lot of room for creativity with that as well. And thank you for saying my writing is beautiful ♥

I'm so glad you liked the flashback in the beginning, and that you could really feel for the characters.

Thanks so much for your wonderful review!!


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