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Review:marauderfan says:
Hi! I'm here for our review swap!

I really like this so far! I've read very few Astoria/Draco stories and the way you portray Astoria is just adorable in this. From the beginning I wanted them to get together (and yay, they do! Just not yet :P )

Your description of how the war impacted people was really good too. I liked your insight into the pureblood families that weren't Death Eaters - it must have been hard for them as well having DE's knocking on the door all the time! And to be honest it fits in with the way I've always thought the Greengrass girls were - attempting to stay neutral and not get involved. I think Astoria's decision to withdraw from the magical world made a lot of sense too. After a war like that, affecting her so strongly even though she tried to stay away from it, I can definitely see her needing a break.

Astoria's meeting with Draco in Diagon Alley was really cute, how her schoolgirl crush came back, and if I'm correct, Draco still has no idea. I've always thought war probably hurt Draco a lot because of his role in it, and it made him re-think a lot about himself; it's clearly in the middle of this phase that Astoria finds him again.

The narration style is really cool too, I like how you did it as a story she's telling to Draco much later. It's a neat way of writing.

I love this so far! You've got a wonderful start, and I'm glad I got to read this!

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