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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hi. I am caved in my house due to this brutal fall of snow -.- And now I'm reading!


I was sure I was like, really behind.. This is weird.

And asdfghjkl; this chapter. SO much action in it! You're so good at churning out these dueling chapters and it's fabulous how awesome you write! The imagery is absolutely fabulous.

I loved the little things about Bellatrix you managed to weave in, and Avery was frightening. His duel with Draco was so intense and I could not take my eyes off the screen. It seemed to scroll down by itself. Gamp was literally going crazy and there was so many things going on my mind was blown on how you managed to keep it so intact!

The duels were written so well as were the effects of all the spells. You showed the Imperius Curse and I was completely panicking because Avery could've made Draco do anything to Astoria!


And this mystery masked man, oh my goodness. What a rubbish cliffhanger :(

Flawless work as always!

Author's Response: Hi, Nadia!

By the time the big storm reaches us -- crosses fingers -- it's supposed to have turned to rain. So I'm really, really hoping that forecast holds up.

YES, ONLY TWO MORE CHAPTERS! Sorry about that, but you started it. :p

Anyway, this chapter was a lot of fun to write because there was so much going on. Fun, but stressful at the same time. I was more worried about Gamp than anyone else, actually. I wasn't sure whether it made sense that he became sort of a passive spectator once Avery emerged onto the scene. Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Yep, he used The L Word, at one of the most pivotal moments of the story. That's how you know he means it.

The masked man will be revealed soon. In fact, since you've already reviewed the next chapter, you already know who he is. So it wasn't **that much** of a cliffhanger, was it?

Ah, so close to the end! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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