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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hi!

This was such a lovely one-shot. I found Luna's portrayal to be amazingly well-written and her ramblings both as she spoke and as she thought seemed very Luna-esque.

I loved how she was thinking about her friends from Hogwarts, since I find Luna to be very friend-oriented. Friends matter a great deal to her, in my mind.

Mortimer was also quite funny as he did seem extremely organized, almost to the point of unbelieveability, but you explained why and it all made sense (even if he does seem to be touched with a little OCD). Although, his socks were a fresh blast of air and made me giggle.

And Luna was very right, Mortimer is a little strange, and that *is* a compliment. I think that this could be the start of a wonderful friendship, since they both seem to balance each other out very well.

Also, Mortimer's just so kind by not being surly about Luna bumping into him. He seems like a very nice fellow!

Yes, so I really liked this and it was super sweet and I kind of wish it wasn't a one-shot because it would be cool to see how these two go from there!

Amazing job!
Lo:)

Author's Response: Thank you!! Oh, I'm so glad you liked my portrayal of Luna, both in the rambling thoughts and in the things she said. That really means a lot as one of the things I worried about when I was writing it was whether it would be Luna-ish enough!

I agree with you, I think Luna valued friends a lot and certainly never took them for granted. I imagine she'd think about them a lot even after they've all gone their separate ways.

I'm so happy that you liked Mortimer and his yellow socks :D Yeah he does seem a little OCD, haha. I'm glad you think he and Luna balance each other out! He was written to be essentially an opposite to her so it's wonderful to hear that it came across as a good friendship! :)

Aw, thanks. I'm sorry that's all there is of the story - I'd like to think they meet again too. There is story potential there, so who knows, maybe some day I'll write more about him haha. Thanks for this wonderful review! ♥


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