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Review:AlexFan says:
Hello there! I'm here for the review tag! This story had caught my eye before and I had thought about whether to read it or not and I finally got a chance to do so today.

This is definitely a slow chapter and a bit fillery but I didn't really mind all that much. I like it because it's different than the usual fast paced chapters that I often read.

I like how I got to know bits and pieces of Rose in this chapter through her thoughts and the flashbacks. Speaking of flashbacks, I thought that they were going to get in my way and that maybe I wouldn't like it all that much, but I surprisingly liked them.

I don't know how you did it, but you somehow kept the flashbacks from interrupting the flow of the story. It was so natural to switch from the present to the past and then back again.

And I've never read a Rose/Teddy story before so this is my first one. I'm still not sure how I feel about the pairing but I can see how it might work out between the two of them.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad that the tag gave you the chance to check out this story. :D

It is a slower moving one - all of my big novels are, but this one most of all because it's a "domestic" story. It's not like a mystery where there's a clear problem/solution or like a romance where the main characters have to get together. I'm still trying to find a way to figure out the best pacing for this story. However, it's wonderful to hear that the flashbacks worked. They're always a challenge, especially pacing-wise because they interrupt the flow, so I'm really glad that you liked how they fit in. ^_^

Teddy/Rose is a controversial ship for people, which is something I never imagined when I first started writing it. It was just a nice alternative to Scorose, and it's still fun to explore the possibilities of this ship. :)

Thank you again!


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