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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hey hey hey!
So I decided to review this instead of your other one since this had one (ONE!) review which I deem unacceptable.

This is a very good start to a novel and your plot already seems to be very nicely thought out. The fact that I now know why Fenrir targeted Remus is making me tear up a bit, but no matter!

This was a very intriguing first chapter and when you post more, I have no doubt readers will be tempted to read on... mostly because I was and there's no more chapters...

I think it'll be interesting to see how the Sirius/Remus relationship comes into play, although I'm not too sure about myself reading it since I'm not too partial to slash, but I do want to say that I might give it a try since this chapter was wonderfully written!

Seriously, I found no CCs and the characterization was too much awesome too handle. I think you've captured Greyback insanely well and your OC is amazing. He seems very prouf to be a father and that tugged on my heartstrings when I realized why Fenrir was looking at the photo.

Stellar job, this chapter was very good and a great introduction!

Author's Response: Hey hey hey! Ahaha I deem it unacceptable as well! ;) Thank you for ending the madness! hehehe No, really, though, slash is generally not as popular as a lot of other pairings, so I went in assuming it'd be a bit of a slower fic, but I'm super excited to have a new review on it!!! Yay! *hugs*

I'm so glad you enjoy the opening! I really want to give a pretty full account of all the Mauraders lives, with a special focus on Remus, and I knew right away that I wanted to start as far back as why he was even chosen. It makes me so sad too, but I'm really happy that it feels like a plausible reason!

I'm so slow at updating! Haha Well, this month especially because NaNo is keeping me focused strictly on my other WIP, but come December I plan to shift between them both, so I hope you're right that others will want to read on! And it's incredible to hear that you are intrigued as well! YAY! :-D

Thank you, thank you, thank you! There's nothing more wonderful for a writer to hear than a reader who is usually uninterested in a certain pairing is suddenly wanting to give it a try! That truly makes my day! And the relationship, while something I am deeply looking forward too, is going to be slow to come together, because I want it to be plausible and realistic and to seem as if it truly could have been a part of canon! We'll see if I can pull it off! haha *fingers crossed*

*squee* THANK YOU! I'm always so nervous to write canon characters and this was the first time I attempted Greyback, so I'm always afraid of getting it wrong! And as far as John it was really fun inventing my version of who I thought Remus' father was, and it's doubly amazing to hear that he's pulling at your heartstrings already! Also, I'm SO THRILLED that you pointed out the moment with Fenrir holding the picture cause that was a moment I was hoping would stick, so phew! :-D

This is such a lovely review. I can't thank you enough for taking the time to write it! You're just wonderful! *hugs* ^.^

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