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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hey hey hey!
Before I go all postal and freak out over this, I just wanted to say that I picked this over Traitorous Hearts only because it had less reviews, but I will get on that ASAP and I might even throw in an extra review!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! This was *too* cute. I'm sorry, but I'm definitely giving you an extra review because I'm gonna flail over this and it won't be pretty. ;)

I loved the interactions between Teddy and Victoire and Victoire's melancholy over her look and her connections seemed really, well, real and saddening. I felt for her.

Now, I loved the tension between the two and the kiss? Magnificent! I was waiting for that! And, just, what, will, huh... GAH! It was just beautiful. I hope you can understand this gobbledegook because I'm not even sure I can, but long story short, I loved it. I think everything from your characterization to you plot to your dialogue to your tone, was perfect. I loved it!

Great job!

Author's Response: Hi Lo!

I love that you reviewed this one. I really need to look into getting it a banner. Teddy and Victoire were fun to write, though fitting everything into a one-shot was a bit of a difficulty. But I think I only love them more for all the time I spent chipping away at the story until it fit into the requirements. I was so worried about it when I published it, because I'd never tried to write a really short story, so reviews like yours mean a lot :D

I'm so glad that you felt both saddened and happy in this fic. That was just what I was going for, so reading that just kind of makes me squeak with happiness!

I cannot even tell you how much this makes me smile. Your "gobbledegook" totally makes sense to me, and it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. I am so happy right now. Thanks so much!


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