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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hey! Totally sorry about the late reply, I only just got my wireless back...

I really liked this. It was very interesting and, seeing as I haven't read many founders fics, I found it very fresh and original. I found Rowena to be endearing in her semi-obsession over Salazar, although the characterization of Salazar is definitely something new. While I do believe he might be able to keep from saying muggle slurs around his friends, I'm not too sure if he could ever, shall we say, 'forgive' muggles. He did grow up in an purist family, did he not? But I'm guessing something happens with Maeve, so I won't go on and say he's OOC just yet. ;)

Also, the way Rowena is not at all impressed with her suitors is quite funny, especially the fiasco with Lord Redwald. Does that man like to talk about himself. And Rowena is right. I don't see what's so impressive about casting an invisibility charm.

I really liked how you focused on the friendships of these characters as well, and it's cool to see them interact before Hogwarts. This seems like a very interesting story and I'm excited to see where the plot is headed.

Great job!
Lo:)

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you :) I'm so glad you found it original, and that you liked Rowena and the friendships between the characters!

That's a good point you made about Salazar. This chapter is from Rowena's point of view, so it's only how she sees him. But I personally think that Salazar wasn't always full of hatred towards Muggles - at least in the beginning, otherwise he would never have been such good friends with Godric.

Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely review, I appreciate it!


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