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Review:Debra20 says:
Helloo there! I am so very sorry for being this late. NaNo has completely taken over my life and coupled with the amount of school work I have, the fact that I had an active review thread completely slipped my mind.

I wanted to tell you that I loved this story! I don't think I've ever read a second person POV story before, and I honestly never thought impossible, but you proved me wrong in a big way! Not only did it seem appropriate, fit for the story you were telling, but in my mind, I just couldn't imagine it any other way. And believe me, that's a very hard thing to make me do haha

Concerning your area of concern (ignore my early morning repetitiveness please :P) I was not bored at all. It was a heartfelt story, the emotions and evolution of George's feelings and his healing process seemed perfectly natural to me (although I couldn't be completely sure, as I've never been something as harsh as he has). I especially liked how George coping with the events were in tandem with the clock's ticking slowing down, ever so slightly. I think that was an AMAZING touch to add. It was weird, but while I was reading those clock sounds, in my mind, I never imagined a clock, rather, I associated them with the beatings of his heart. At first they were powerful and fast and often because the loss was still fresh, but over time, as healing started to happen, he started soothing and patching himself up, so the tick tocks were less often, less powerful. Great job!

I think it's a very well written piece!

Author's Response: Hey! No problem I know how it is! :L

I am so happy that I have convinced you especially if that is a hard thing to do in your case :P

I never thought of it as the beating as a heart but that works so well, thanks for pointing that out to me :D

Thanks for the review, I don't know how to respond to praise tbh but seriously thanks for the review it means a lot.

:)


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