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Review:toomanycurls says:
I'm here!! To review away!!

:-o I can't believe Lexi doesn't like Lupin! Be still my heart.

I so like the idea of Lily being a gossip. :D It just makes my day to have her be much less perfect.

haha, Remus' reaction to Lexi's nickname for Dumbledore. Many laughs were had.

No, she shouldn't be so quick to judge Remus. :P I could see how Lexi would see him as quite different.

I like that Lupin is re-thinking his assumptions about Ravenclaws. OooOOoooh, Remus has a crush!!

Aww, okay, I love the back and forth they have about Lupin's crush. I did have a hard time following a who was speaking in some of the lines, but a few dispersed dialogue tags would fix that. I just want to hug Lexi about her mom.

They are both really cool - I approve hanging out.

I'm going to get some popcorn for this fight between Charlie and Lexi. brb

Okay, back.

OoooOoh. They said some words. darn.

Okay, what is up with Charlie? Ooh, I think Lupin knows.

Dude, Carter needs to back the eff off. *grumble*

I am glad Lexi stood up for Charlie even if she's miffed and they're in the middle of a thing.

and then she just flipped out on Charlie and Lupin. what the eff dude??!?!

hmm, interesting that she's seeking help with nonverbal spells. That might be interesting later on. Ha, Prof McLaren is quite a hoot.

Really awesome chapter. The plot is twisting even more!!

Author's Response: Hey!

Don't worry! The Lupin/Lexi fiasco will pass! For a short period of time... But it will pass! And yay for a nonperfect Lily!

I will definitely try and rework that dialogue then since it got a little confusing, so thank you for pointing that out!!!

And momma drama! One of my favourite kinds of drama! And yay for hang outs and fights and popcorn!

Eesh! Words! How dare they? And yes, Lupin knows about Charlie's predicament. And Carter is really important! Don't hate him. Pretty please? :)

And yay for friendship! Although she's not the most stable so no yay for flipping out?

And yes, I love Professor McLaren. She's so awesome!

Yay! I'm glad you still like it! Thanks so much!

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