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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
*shuffles in guiltily..*

Okay, I know, I'm such a liar. I was going to try to finish all of this last week but then I couldn't and now you're done so I have nothing to truly catch up on - I can now only finish. That's very scary.

Anyway, wow, what an action packed chapter! I think the beauty of this was how fast paced it was, but you wrote it in such a way that not only were my eyes unable to leave the screen, I was able to follow everything. It was amazing.

I absolutely adored Narcissa in the previous chapters, and I think she really got her chance to shine in this one. It was amazing seeing that control she had, and how she handled the situation with such ease. I think she's very strong, and I've come to love her in this!

Ah, Lucius. He's off his rocker. Definitely getting old. But then he also backed Draco up, and that was sweet, though kind of awkward to read. It was like when your parents get all lovey dovey and you're like, "Er..." It was kinda funny, and also a nice touch at the same time.

I just thoroughly enjoy Astoria's "couldn't care less about Daphne's problems" attitude. I love it because it's so funny, and really really amazing to read. Daphne's character definitely did lighten up the mood, and I find her a bit obnoxious, but still a hilariously annoying character... If that makes sense :P

And AH, cliffie! I'll definitely read the next chapter tonight, though I might not get around to reviewing till tomorrow... We'll see *shrugs* But, a really job well done with this.

Congrats on completing!

Author's Response: Hi, Nadia! No guilt, I won't hear of it! I always love seeing you come back whenever you can spare the time.

This was probably my second-favorite chapter of the story to write because it is so fast-paced. The ball is rolling at top speed now and the end it near.

I love Narcissa as a character. She was completely disposable for the first 5 books -- pretty much like Draco -- and then she suddenly emerges as this extremely strong female character who was willing to defy Voldemort to protect what was important to her. She's no less strong than Lily Potter or Molly Weasley in that regard, just from a very different background.

Poor Lucius has lost the plot at this point, but he's still surprisingly effective as a fighter. At least against relatively weak competition.

Astoria suffers her sister's relationship issues with relatively good grace, but her mind is obviously elsewhere. I'm glad that Daphne was able to lighten the mood a bit. That's mostly what I was hoping for.

You're so close to the end! It's awesome but also a little sad. I've really enjoyed reading all of your reviews and following along just a bit as you read the story. Thanks for all of the support and feedback!


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