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Review:Courtney Dark says:

Wow, it has been far too long since I read and reviewed the last chapter of Detox, and I am so sorry about that! But I'm back now, so we can all celebrate! Woo! Not to sound up myself or anything...

Anyway, this chapter was just absolutely superb. You are so amazing at writing these confrontations between Draco and 'the bad guys' and even better at writing duelling scenes. I seriously don't know how you do it. You manage to keep this duel so fast and intense and a little scary, but believable (well, as believable as a duel can be, anyway) and complex at the same time. I don't even know what else I can say about it, except that you need to share the writing talent pills, please.

I'm so sad that I only have two chapters to go of this awesome story, because I have really grown to love the way you've written Draco. You've made him into this really likeable guy for me, without him becoming this completely unDracoish character.

I enjoyed Astoria's point of view, too, especially that cliffhanger at the end! Who is this masked wizard, I wonder? I guess I'll just have to read on to find out!


Author's Response: Hi, Courtney!

No need to apologize! I always love seeing you back again. Believe me, I'm celebrating, too! :)

I really enjoy writing fight scenes, and this one was no different. I like the challenge of trying to keep a mental picture of everything that's going on and where various characters are standing and what they're doing. This one was over relatively quickly, but it was definitely intense.

Only one more to go before the epilogue, but they're both pretty intense. I hope you like them. I never really start out with the intention of making Draco likeable. He still has some prejudices and a mean streak. But I'm glad you've come to think of him differently.

The masked wizard will be revealed very soon. I'm really curious to see what you think of the final outcome.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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