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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hello! I spent my free time yesterday reading this story, and I just wanted to tell you how much I love it!!

Emily is a very well-developed character, and that's not something that every OC in fanfiction can say! I love her personality, and the fact that she has anxiety and depression adds so much to it. After all, the Wizarding World would just go back to normal after the war. It needed time to recuperate, and most of the post-war stories that I've seen haven't taken that into account. I feel bad that Emily has to suffer through mental health issues, but it makes her so much more of an interesting and REAL character. Everyone has problems, even in fanfiction. Thanks for putting reality back into the equation! :)

I really love her relationship with Minerva, as well. The headmistress seems to be slightly motherly, which doesn't seem like a usual thing on the surface. McGonagall has always been a very uptight, strict professor, and that characterization has been taken to the extreme in fanfiction. But she cared so much for Harry, Ron, and Hermione that it is hard to believe that she DIDN'T harbor motherly-ish feelings for them. The fact that she's watching after Emily, making sure that she gets what she needs, is just so wonderful and different. I love it!!!

Timothy Briar is one of my favorite male OCs currently. (I decided that as soon as he started appearing more.) He seems quite honorable, and really nice. I hope that he stays that way, and that he brings Emily all of the happiness that she deserves. He could be very good for her, if only he would show up in the next chapter or two! I think that she's missing him, just a little. ;)

So... Please update very soon if you can!! This is a really awesome story, incredibly original, and just amazingly detailed and well-written all around. I hope that you get nominated for an award or something! :D


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