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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hi, hi, hi!!!

Oh my god, I think my heart is slowly breaking. Awww, Sirius turning up from the Potter's no less I'm guessing. The way he tells Melora he's not a traitor and that he loves her and Emma just hits me in the feels.

I really like how you added in about Remus asking to look after Harry, his life would have been so different if Albus had allowed it.

The feels, the feels asdfghjkl. This chapter is so heart breaking, especially when Sirius visited her and then when Melora made the decision to change Emma's surname.

Sad indeed :'(

I can't believe there's only one chapter of this story left, I love it so much and I'll be sad to see it over. I just hope that at least Melora and Emma have a happy ending.

I have thoughts either of the epilogue being set where Melora's waving Emma off on the Hogwarts express or having Emma meet Harry in third year or something when new of Sirius' breakout is around.

I'm intrigued about the special treat, is this news of a sequel maybe? One can only hope.

Love this story so much!!!

12/10
-Potterfan310
Soph :D xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I know, it's such a sad ending, but it's hard to finish a Marauder fic in anyway that's not heartbreaking!

The epilogue will be set the summer before Emma's fifth year (Harry's third), right after Sirius breaks out of prison.

Thanks again for all of your reviews! I really appreciate all of them!!!


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